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lozerfac3
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This is going to be my thread of poems that I wrote. Please leave a comment about what you think of them! If it's a funky poem that needs to be improved, I would like to improve it. But other than that, it's mostly for fun lol

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I only wrote one poem so far and to be honest, it might be the only one. But we will see! This one goes out to my girlfriend who I asked out last week. We are still in the honeymoon stage of course, so this is super fresh! Lemme know if I should share it with her on our first month anniversary. I changed her name for privacy.

Her presence is desired
And she makes me so feliz
Perfect when she smiles
Pearly white and clean
You, Elena Ortiz, I wanna kiss you on the cheek!

For me to call you mine
Is a flex to say the least
Ready by my side
Say prayers on our knees
This the typa love that gives angels jubilee

Meet me at the beach
Or on a ‘coaster ride
Never at the movies
To ever see you cry
Here’s to many months together, always you and I

lozerfac3
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Also, if she looks up the lyrics to this poem, will this thread show up on any search engines? I'm kinda embarrassed if she found my account haha

sciller45
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Not gonna talk about rap or poetry because I suck at those, but I looked it up and I doubt she'd see it.

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